Poetry - Life

Life


Living, calling
Constantly falling
Buying, trading
Constantly fading

When words aren’t enough
Kill
Don’t let it control you
Pick up the pill

Have you lived?
Have you lied?
Have you failed?
Have you tried?

I don’t think so


Heroes


Trees fall
With a flash of light
Through the spines of children

An innocent day
A happy day
Turned to rubble

A screech through the night sky
A flash of red
A flash of blue

We can all be heroes
Through and through

Very very nice!! Did you do that? Hold crap man, that's awesome,. and it's not even too childish!! (No offense intended there, if you were.. Lol..)

Yeah I made it.

It was my first attempt at poetry.

Thanks for being nice.

I really like it, one thing you could do though, i'm not sure if this is possible at the moment, it was quite strange reading a poem with different amounts of syllables in each line, try making it more even. But if not it's still awesome

:3

Update.

Thanks Lemon.